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Michael Owusu Nkansah M.Ed's avatar

Woaw! Brilliant, as always. 'There is a trembling, a quiet disarray. A final crackening.' - my favorite part.

Brenda Underwood's avatar

Thank you Michael

Easy Weezy's avatar

That was beautifully written Brenda and This is the moment when the truth sets us free. have a good one!!!

Easy Weezy's avatar

you welcome mate, do take care!!!

adrie's avatar

Love these lines in particular:

"When the price is no longer conformity,

But the selling of one’s soul."

Brenda Underwood's avatar

Thank you Michael

Brenda Underwood's avatar

It lands like a bolt of lightning

Yet it is felt like a kiss of love